I can help you re-word that.

Rachel somehow manages to turn my jumbled thoughts and terrible grammar into coherent, well-structured sentences. In fact, if this blurb makes any sense at all, it's probably because she edited it to be that way. Her suggestions always come from a place of genuine caring as she pushes the story to be as good as it could possibly be. I recommend her services to anyone I know who is writing anything—whether they ask for advice or not—as I think her astute observations can help them with any shortcomings in their narratives.